The Lone Hunger Strike Comments

Thanks most would not say editing need, and fixed one of my spelling mistakes, not sure what else needs fixed I think I went over it six times now. But it seems one of my flaws, is indeed my English. But thanks for that because I'm not sure I would have caught the spelling mistake if you would have not said anything.

I think this is a wonderful poem. The disillusionement in the persona about the staus quo is very palpable. There are no easy answers to the questions raised, just popular ones. And sometimes, we end up getting our nourishment from Feeding on an empty ego. Editing needed.