With water rushing down
From those stone like balls
With a twisted face
I try hard to see his tooth
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With every pain life inflicts on him He bleeds red water But yet I see a beam of light in it. after writing all that you end the poem positively and when i read it i was very happy. we poets shall spread positive ideas. God bless u. Tony
But I wonder if anything good can yield out from the loner My answers still seem foggy But yet I see a beam of light in it- -Beautiful lines, your heartfelt thoughts are well presented in the poem, thanks for sharing.
An insightful and poignant rendition nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Arnee.