Thursday, January 17, 2008

The Lost Sun (African Song) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Police herd the helpless through Landrover doors.
Soldiers mount women like dogs on all fours.
Children bear parents, shot down in the road.
How can the Sun be so terribly cold?
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Frank Bana
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John Nightingale 17 January 2008

Sometimes change can be bitter. A fine poem tackling real issues. Good work.

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Original Unknown Girl 17 January 2008

Such a sad picture you paint with your words Frank... one which we can relate to the real issues that occur in Africa. You give us food for thought with this one. HG: -) xx

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Anita Atina 17 January 2008

Gritty, realistic, sad tale well told! Frank I'm deeply impressed.

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