The Love I Felt Poem by Victoria Hudson

The Love I Felt

Rating: 4.8


As I looka around
I feel alone
Feeling six feet underground
Cold as stone

I feel like apart of me is gone
Not to be seen
But like a doe and her fawn
We have a chance to meet

Since you left
Alone I have been
Not wanting to deal with theft
But not letting anyone in

Someone stole my heart today
Stole it from you I mean
They stole it and ran away
But I remember what I seen

The tear that dropped
The cry that echoed
It made me lose all hope
But my love is never cold

I love you my dear
Since the day I felt it
The love that was near
When we first met

My love
My life
My pain
My strife
All gone once you came
You stol my heart
You can do it again
Do it for my part.

Friday, March 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Connor Whyte 14 March 2016

I am sorry you feel so alone no one should ever have to feel that way but sometimes being alone opens opportunities you have not seen since someone was around find the beauty in yourself and you will see you are never alone. Strong words don't give up you got talent.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2016

My love My life My pain My strife All gone once you came You stol my heart You can do it again Do it for my part. A great love poem. please write more and publish.. write down your feelings and emotions and write and rewrite in a poetic way. thank you for this passionate poem tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 March 2016

Love and pain! ! Very common in life. Be strong and move on. Thanks for sharing.

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