Rachel Flint

Rookie - 5 Points (15/7/88 / Leeds)

The Lover's Promise - Poem by Rachel Flint

I will try to remember
That you are human.
I aim not to build
Your pedestal too high
So you won’t get injured when you fall.

I will try to remind myself
That you get sick,
Tired, Angry
Hormonal, Irrational,
That you are normal overall
When I dream of you on your white steed.

I will try to ignore the love songs
That speak of a true and perfect love,
And instead thank the Lord
For my beautifully human one.

This is my promise -
Fingers crossed!


Comments about The Lover's Promise by Rachel Flint

  • (2/16/2008 10:01:00 AM)

    This is absolutely beautiful, Rachel. Both the style, and the idea. Congrats, and all the best. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 6, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 27, 2011


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