Sunday, April 13, 2008

The Lovers Last Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

With rain and storm it crosses the line
Screeching brakes screams,
Shattered glass so fine,
Silence but, for a spinning wheel
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Ken e Hall
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Ken E Hall 06 September 2009

NB In 1993 six days before Xmas my eldest daughter Gail Was run down crossing the road, in hospital on life support My wife and I never left her side. On Xmas eve sadly she died. At the time part of myself died and Gail had never known the Wonder of a lover, hence I wrote this poem putting myself in the Imaginary lover’s shoes

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Matt Mooney 05 September 2009

A tragic tale of united love set to music. The contrast between the opening and the body of the poem is dramatic.10.

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Ken e Hall

Ken e Hall

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