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The Man I Shot - Poem by India Mysticali

Oh lord, oh dear
what have I done?
I've shot a man
with my own gun.

I waited patiently
with all my might
for some clue to his
position in the night

He shot me first
clear as a bell
but that's not all
of my story to tell

For then, oh dear,
I faked an act
and made it look
like my death was fact

And then I shot him
when he was unaware
and I wondered who it was
who'd fought me so fair

I turned over his corpse
What, then, did I see?
my dear, little brother
staring back at me.


Comments about The Man I Shot by India Mysticali

  • (11/4/2005 1:13:00 AM)


    Thank you, India! as Alanis would sing. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/3/2005 9:19:00 PM)


    Wow, I sure hope this is fiction India. Quite a poem.....Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 3, 2005



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