The Merciless Sea Poem by Cat Garza

The Merciless Sea

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I am suffocating,
The sea is patiently waiting
For my last struggling breath,
Then there came with great pain
An icy, piercing, stabbing feeling
In my chest,
The beautiful, decieving, merciless sea
Lead me down the path of death.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
everything has a name but me 09 February 2008

Short, but wonderfully done! This language could turn this short poem into an epic story! A tale of frightful adventure and ravaging struggle. This is what I saw in these few lines, and you have inspired me to write evermore.

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Sandra Fowler 27 December 2005

Your poems have touched me. Cheers for your courage! Take care. Warm regards, Sandra Fowler

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