The Mirror Within Poem by Serena Silenced
The Mirror Within
I stand on the outside looking in.
I am not comforted by what I see.
Someone is in there hiding.
She is not what she appears to be.
I stare at her for a moment.
She is looking right through me.
She is the mirror within.
She is deflecting all of my animosity.
I really like the metaphor of the mirror deflecting negative feelings. And I love the progression from self-loathing to validation. Hard to do in a short poem. Very well done. I look forward to reading more of your work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 1:55:48 AM # 1.0.0.1119
She is the mirror within. She is deflecting all of my animosity. Nice perception. Way different from your poem What Lies Beneath A word of thanks for the nice comment of Jesse Elisbury.