Wednesday, November 23, 2011

The Moment Comments

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The moment I've been found
is the moment I've been lost
fragmental self frozen
no longer me
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Miroslava Odalovic
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Miroslava Odalovic 23 November 2011

Wow, thank you Unwritten I just posted a sequel to this :) , it's a very nice heart felt comment poem you wrote, perhaps I am wise (sometimes? ? ? ?) lol but you are certainly the SOul. 'cos you can make a person smile, would like to exchange that for 'wisdom' you're referring to :)

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Unwritten Soul 23 November 2011

One day you will reach one point, a moment.... a moment to tied all the moments of past.. a moment that bear all the lessons, happy and pain everything you lost and gain in a moment the moment when you get wiser than ever and rise like everything related in one as memory You always wise when writing, like it much :) :) :) Smile always for better days! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten SOul

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