The Moment It Died Poem by moon batchelder

The Moment It Died

Rating: 5.0


the moment it died
i heard the sound;
(a small and curious pause.

not like as if heaven
came crashing down
at all! no furious wars.

no sirens wailing,
no passionate din,
no violent end of the world.

but the moment it died,
this love i had found,
in my heart,)
- like a pin, hit the floor.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 December 2006

Stellar imagework, Moon>>>Nice tight & crisp structure, flowing throughout... Solid crafting, indeed FJR

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moon batchelder

bemidji, minnesota
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