Monday, May 11, 2009

The Moody Rain Goddess In Poor Man's Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's a dark feast and stars were hidden purposely
And the Moon on vacation it seems.
The Goddess comes out through the dark clouds,
Just a small drizzle to their innocent hopes.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Sandra Fowler 11 May 2009

Great atmosphere in this one. It adds to the enigmatic fascination of your poem. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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