The Moody Rain Goddess In Poor Man's Sky Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Moody Rain Goddess In Poor Man's Sky

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It's a dark feast and stars were hidden purposely
And the Moon on vacation it seems.
The Goddess comes out through the dark clouds,
Just a small drizzle to their innocent hopes.
The poor girl is ready to go out from the ghetto with an unknown bridegroom,
A shooting star has fallen down to their journey as a chief guest.
'A good omen my dear and make a hundred thousand offspring for the next census to get temper with the blunt life.'
The bride's close relative an old Blacksmith said.

Monday, May 11, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: clouds,dark,journey,star
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 11 May 2009

Great atmosphere in this one. It adds to the enigmatic fascination of your poem. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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