The Moon Poem by Ana Rose Trazo

The Moon

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Oh Dear Moon! Why are you so gloomy tonight?
Shrouded by the clouds; It covers your light.
Sometimes you shines bright yet alone all night.
It made me wonder how empty you'd me might.

Everybody sees you but nobody cares.
No one even dare to stay with you dear!
They all admire the beauty that you have
But no one seemed to fill the whole in your heart.

Often you just wish to be lost among the clouds
Or to just break and disappear like dusts
But you're still able to keep your light inside.
Oh Dear Moon! Even behind the clouds you remain to shine bright.

Tuesday, January 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 14 February 2019

A nice poetic ode to the moon, very well written with clever imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 January 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Ana R. T. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2018

Everybody sees you but nobody cares. No one even dare to stay with you dear! They all admire the beauty that you have But no one seemed to fill the whole in your heart. talking to the moon in a very poetic way....... let your soliloquies give u comfort and to your readers......... thank you dear.. tony

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