The Morning Breaks Out Comments

ah I was riding the morning breaks then Nair punctuated paradise capitalized it into a small black box and thrown away the key while the morning breaks and I watched amazed as the light paled misty grey into dark as darkness crept over the earth Nairwood

Vivid imagery and rich diction emphasis your poetic talent. Excellent poem. Now pay attention to the punctuation marks and capital letters which are very much of a need.