The Most Influential Look Poem by hassan hayati

The Most Influential Look

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The dominant deer glanced at the herd
A soft wind played in his mane and beard
Stood on a hill brave like a bear
His firm masculine body agile like a bird

Stared at the frontiers, no blink in his eyes
Unbelievably he smelled the gun powder of the hunter guys
A bang was heard and his beloved doe was shot
She fell on her knees then dropped, she couldn't rise

The deer took the rest and his last look was made
His eyes full of tear all his love was paid
The doe accepted the grace and smiled
She meant "your love and attention is never degrade"

Later the hunter was staring at her eyes, open wide
Utmost hate was defused from that prettiest side
The man hated his act, and regretted the hunt
He never touched the gun to respect the wild

The Most Influential Look
Monday, March 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2020

The man hated his act, and regretted the hunt He never touched the gun to respect the wild

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Hassan Hayati 17 January 2020

Thank you very much sir Jawad your kind attention is always a meaningful motivation for me. I learn from you.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 January 2019

great poem, sir! the given message is need of the hour and we must look over nature and its creatures that is duty of every man. a thoughful poem!

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Hassan Hayati 29 January 2019

Yes dear Jagdish, this is my wish, I hope that human will stop this hobby called Hunting, how can we be happy by killing a creature, unfortunately this is only made by human.

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Hassan Hayati 15 April 2018

thanks dear Akhtar for your attention and time to read my words.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

So the hunter became hunted, yes, beauty can silent the roaring guns.

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