I hear the music
The music is playing
The music is soft
The music is now fading
...
Read full text
It's okah. But to be honest i really didn't like it. It just seemed like a little kid wrote it because it was so simple sorry kid: (
thats how I feel when I don't hear music, I feel like a lifeless doll everyday without it, good job, I feel your pain!
Also, the IS life without music. Don't be dumb. Without music there is no music and as sad as it sounds life will still go on. Wake up.
What a ridiculously bad poem! It is redundant, bland, and uncreative. Are you 'critics' blind or is your taste in poetry that bad? You should apologize to Music, It didn't deserve that.
I love this poem, its well written and i agree, there is no life with out music
we ca not live without music cause it washes away ou pains and brings back sweet memories.Good work
hi. i wonder what MUSIC really means to u. i'm also crazy about music as you do but i never fond that music could be gone with...
Hi Jessica, This one is good poem too. Your style is very unique and different. You are expessive and have great imagery. Take care.
Music is my life and l want to be a singer