The Mystery Behind The Taken Advantage Poem by Shalia Robinson

The Mystery Behind The Taken Advantage

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The mystery behind the taken advantage
It lies deep within a fresh cabbage
Not ready to be revealed to that scar that was not fully healed
Ready to expose the beast that held their mouth sealed
Forcing their strong power
And then trying to walk on in denial
For what the beast did was sure stinky and file
Laying in their rotten cell sick in the mind
Whipping down someone with pride
Making them feel worthless
And taking them to a mind of careless
For it's a mystery because what happen remains untold
Til today the case hasn't been unfold
For those that are taken advantage will rise
But if you look at the circumstances you'll be surprised
And the one that did this life will not be super sized
The mystery is hard to figure out from a natural eye
But those with that experience spiritual eye have a clue
A clue of what to do to help that blue mystery too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
dgdftghdrth drydrtyrt 17 February 2007

wow girl you are right in the money! ! ! !

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Geoff Warden 17 February 2007

Powerful write young Miss, , , , , structure is solid and line after line continually flows well done..........

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