Wednesday, December 13, 2006

The New Maji Comments

Rating: 5.0

With the passing of the storm,
The sky was clear and
The streets swept clean
By the rain.
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Kee Thampi 18 December 2006

And yet, He took the time To look in the window And there in the back corner Was a wig. Not just an ordinary wig But one that looked as if It was made with real hair, And I wish to study art of story telling.... this is nicely crafted, confined to the lively pictures...

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Francesca Johnson 13 December 2006

This is a very, very long poem but I can forgive it's length because it had me entranced the whole way through. It was warm and kind, and although I found the ending a bit 'short' (it could have had more impact, I hope you don't mind me saying this?) I though it was a beautiful read, Sidi. This is one poem which will stick in my mind. Just don't ask me to read it through a second time, ha ha. : -) Love, Fran xx

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