john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
john tiong chunghoo
Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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The Note

Rating: 5.0
one night on the beach
i chanced upon a bottle
with a little note bearing words so chilly
i thought it should be left
in the bottle and corked
the way they were in the heart of the author
the andaman sea roared, cried to claim the bottle
the little note as dry as it was found
Sweetie Sarah<3 31 May 2006
it gives me the shivers. Just trying to guess wat the note said. it could be many things. Nice work. Sweetie Sarah
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Sophia White 31 May 2006
True poetry, John. I feel like I was there, that I was the one who picked up the bottle. Very well done.
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Brian Dorn 31 May 2006
John, some things are better left alone. Excellent write! ! Brian
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