Wednesday, April 15, 2009

The Oblique Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Walk straight dear Master.'
He mutters.
Thank you for your advise
And I'll try my level best.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 18 April 2009

This is a fascinating subject for a poem - the shadowy figure and lifelong companion who is only seen when the sun shines. Your final line is enigmatic, Nimal and leaves the reader wondering. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 15 April 2009

Rather chilling. But I doubt if a person can ever be separated from his shadow. Thought provoking, Nimal. Kind regards, Sandra

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Joseph Poewhit 15 April 2009

Always comes down to the time

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