Saturday, November 19, 2016

The Old Man Comments

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From the shack covered hills
of the shanty town
a dazed old man struggles down
with cold chills and hot thrills
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Gert Strydom
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Kim Barney 19 November 2016

An interesting tale. Makes one wonder where he got the sack of flour, Did he pay for it or steal it? Just a little slice of his life, enough to make us curious. Well done.

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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