Thursday, April 2, 2015

The Old Man's Tale Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cast aside my feelings for a moment
And listened to the tale the old man read
And for a while it took me on a journey
Describing as it did, the life he led
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Phil Soar
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Kim Barney 02 April 2015

I would be interested in your story, as your poem was highly interesting. You have one little misprint you probably want to change. On live fifteen I'm sure you meant THINK instead of THING.

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