Tuesday, August 22, 2006

The Old Mans Curse Comments

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Where the sun meets the moon
is where i lay now waiting for your doom
its been more than a year
and as even the wind knows, life to me was never more fair
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tinashe severa
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Nimal Dunuhinga 22 August 2006

The destiny of the old man is very pathetic and it shows the fragility of life.How can a man survive of this irresistible punishment? Excellent poem Tinashe.

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Allan James Saywell 22 August 2006

this poem is different from the usual religeous fare only one typo error worth a ten from the old poet AJS

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tinashe severa

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