The Old Woman Comments

I have more I could say, want to say, and may say in the future (if I return here) , but for now I'll send this to my 'favorites' though I think THAT list is full. bri : )

So the above illustration formed in HER demented mind? That's frightening, hilarious, sad, and presumed by YOU, Brayden you sick SICK poet! ! ! !

A female lobster and an aging humect/inshum? I like good alliterations, ...like this one: 'pleasant presence'. ;)

'As the emotions grew more profoundly.' Maybe use 'profound'? I stared at the 'cartoon' for about ten seconds before emitting a low, nearly unheard laugh.