The Old Woman Poem by Brayden R. Kennedy

The Old Woman



The old woman sat alone in her ancient chair,
Gently rocking with the breeze.
Her mind elsewhere in a distant time.
A time when the demons of age were unbeknownst to her.
A time when the pleasant presence of youth was a
Mainstay of life.
The memory danced around her mind vividly.
The joy of being alive rang through the walls of her mind.
The memory became more and more clear,
As the emotions grew more profoundly.
A smile came to the aged face.
Wait, that can't be right…
The memory stood still.
The woman stayed in a confused state.
The wicked sands of time broke through the peace and solitude.
A wave of pained and unintentional realization
Shook the woman to her core.
Yet, as soon as the wave rolled past,
A blissful ignorance replaced any recollection of the memory.
The old woman returned to her steady rockin,
Unaware of the shame that had just occurred.
Time claimed yet another trophy.

The Old Woman
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Bri Edwards 14 May 2023

I have more I could say, want to say, and may say in the future (if I return here) , but for now I'll send this to my 'favorites' though I think THAT list is full. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 14 May 2023

So the above illustration formed in HER demented mind? That's frightening, hilarious, sad, and presumed by YOU, Brayden you sick SICK poet! ! ! !

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Bri Edwards 14 May 2023

A female lobster and an aging humect/inshum? I like good alliterations, ...like this one: 'pleasant presence'. ;)

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Bri Edwards 14 May 2023

'As the emotions grew more profoundly.' Maybe use 'profound'? I stared at the 'cartoon' for about ten seconds before emitting a low, nearly unheard laugh.

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