The Pain Comments
What a sadness when birds stop their song
The song they started singing in a chorus
While you were left like a wounded bird
Above your eyelids the brows show their dusk
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A beautiful poem Genc! Your language and the the metaphors are so good. It is indeed a pain when the birds stop singing! Here is a full vote for you, Genc!
I like the line, How much pain when hearts part like an apple cut in two pieces Thanks for sharing..
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3/15/2026 9:45:22 PM # 1.0.0
I like every line and every word.