Brian McMurdo

Rookie (27 October 1991 / Weston Super Mare)

The Party - Poem by Brian McMurdo

Dancing moving fighting
Movement in the darkness
Pulsing like my heart
Yet I am still numb…

Music voices noises
Wash over me like a wave
Pressing down on me
Yet I am deaf…

Lights limbs faces
A whirlwind of colour
Flashes before my eyes
Yet I am blind…

Thoughts messages impulses
Rush through my brain
Arguing with my heart
Yet… I am lost to you


Comments about The Party by Brian McMurdo

  • (3/18/2007 8:03:00 AM)

    wonderful i love it brian (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 18, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, February 4, 2011


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