Saturday, January 31, 2009

The Perfect Guy Comments

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When the first time I saw you I already liked you.
It's because of your hair,
But your hair was covering your face.
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Angellica Castillo
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Nia Riz 31 January 2009

a beautiful poem! ...but there are some grammer errors here...you have written 'But I did found him; '.... it is supposed to be 'but i did find him' or 'but i had found him'.. Nia

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