The Pit Poem by Racheal

The Pit

Rating: 4.7


The pit is ever growing
Sucking me into its contagious
Desire of needing, wanting, yearning
To have it all within arms reach

The wanting never stop
It’s always there no matter
What I do, it will always
Be there through rain or shine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
RaChEl BiShOp 19 December 2009

this one is great too

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Rachel Smailliw 08 January 2009

Wow! You really like this person. Reminds me of one of my friends, lol.

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Tj Becker 26 September 2008

By wanting it all, material things or your obsession; -) Good poem Keep up the great work

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Aijaz Asif 12 September 2008

a very beautiful write specialy this line ' Desire of needing, wanting, yearning' beautiful very beautiful....keep on writing

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