The Point Poem by Mer Brown

The Point

Rating: 4.2


I may be weak but
I'm still here

I hear you but I would rather
be deaf

I drown, I suffocate, I can't breathe
I cry, I cry, I cry

no one notices
they simply make it worse

I wonder what's the point.

Monday, November 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,sadness,suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luiza 10 November 2017

Nice poem and nice writing. So true

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 November 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Mer. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Ja Ja 06 November 2017

The point is to persevere. But then those tears appear. Which in its way. Becomes a cliche. I was of no help, but maybe the effort will count for something.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2017

Death is a certain point of life and this is true. This gives crying effect in mind. An amazing poem is beautifully drafted..10

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