I may be weak but
I'm still here
I hear you but I would rather
be deaf
I drown, I suffocate, I can't breathe
I cry, I cry, I cry
no one notices
they simply make it worse
I wonder what's the point.
A great start with a nice poem, Mer. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
The point is to persevere. But then those tears appear. Which in its way. Becomes a cliche. I was of no help, but maybe the effort will count for something.
Death is a certain point of life and this is true. This gives crying effect in mind. An amazing poem is beautifully drafted..10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice poem and nice writing. So true