Wednesday, January 25, 2017

The Price Comments

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The Price

Brave men under white crosses in Europe, and on Pacific Islands.
Survivors with stumps where limbs used to be.
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Raymond Chilensky
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Chinedu Dike 26 January 2017

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Raymond.

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Kim Barney 26 January 2017

A very nice poem. Just one thing: in the first line of the penultimate verse, I think you meant BORDERS instead of BOARDERS. This appears to be the first poem that you have posted on this website. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Annette Aitken 25 January 2017

A very powerful piece sadly so very true. If only it was as simple as just saying ...NO....a great write. Annette

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