The Promise Poem by ritty patnaik

The Promise

Rating: 5.0


from ages
in your eyes
the universe is burning
like a big, fireball!

raining like acid
are jealousy, ego and
sensuality.
but you have been patient,
and pragmatic
awating the right time!
to reveal.

man overpowered,
in the shackles of
societys, social drama.
why he should search,
for beginning or end of time.

oppertunity, like a python,
mouth open to swallow,
waiting.
you also digest all this
in silence.

let the earth burn, .
let love, seperation
affection, afflictions,
thoughts burn,
into ashes.,
along with jealousy and ego.,
and come out like pure gold!

a new world will be born
with your wish.
from that wish, will be born
the love of eternity,
and the woman of beauty and charm!

when will this endless waiting finish
when will the sleeping dream take birth
of a new world
when will love find its tunes
of old songs?
and try to sing them.

like always losing,
is not a new thing.
but, in your promise for coming,
a little star twinkles like hope,
shining!
in the darkness of my being

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 03 September 2009

Expectancy has always been giving hope and strength to suffering people througout the ages, with each day passing the need for some messiah is growing, when and where he shall appear is not known by us, let's hope that he will bring peace and tranquility for the world, though i seriously doubt, as the world has gone beyond reperation and therefore a complete thrashing out is more probable. A write coming from heart and contains much to ponder upon!

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