yeye joyce dedios


The Promise - Poem by yeye joyce dedios

I made a promise to the one i love
We both made a promise
A promise come's from our heart

A promise to full fill and not to be broken
And i made a vow to love her and respect her
a promise that i will never ever gonna find another woman

A vow to be with her side in times
she needs a comfort and to talk with her problems

And time goes by and days past by
MY love for her will never gonna change
in every minute and every second's every day
she's always what ive been thinking of

Till the day she left me!
The promise the vow's the love that we had
And the respect that i gave to her
was broken into pieces..

her i am in this dark room!
and i feel so blue
the emotion was express
I cry
and cry
till their's no tears to cry for!
im sad so lonely because of you! !


Comments about The Promise by yeye joyce dedios

  • Hans Vr (12/13/2011 8:20:00 AM)


    This is a nice poem yeye, with the emotion well expressed.
    Some minor grammar corrections may make it still more enjoyable.
    Keep writing poetry.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 13, 2013


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