me, a young traveller
on the route of life,
am moving along the wind
with questions many
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gr8 poem, simple and true. gr8 thinking and gr8 topic. beautifully expressed with no bombastic terms. the poem is brief and explanatory. brevity is the soul of wit. and the question still remains in the hearts of many'who is god' i wonder. good work. keep it up. by the way thanx for the comments on my poem
Very intelligent! The poem almost a Questionnaire and I am bit helpless as a small creature I only know two things. We come like water and go like wind. That's my entire dear.
Nice write; you pose valid questions; perhaps some of them can be answered now; please see the following poems of mine: 'Daily Bread', 'Experiencing God', 'Petitions to God' and 'Spiritual Irony'.
i like the line 'moving along the wind' it has a certain aura, pulls up memories that aren't there, like shifting sand dunes in a desert, unearthing and burying secrets constantly.
good one, good one. short and sweet...upto the mark. i really likd this one