Sunday, October 15, 2006

The Rains Comments

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The rains come and wash away
the happy gleam inside my eyes
and darken them with their
gray clouded blanket.
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Ernestine Northover 16 October 2006

This is a nice write Cokbod, very well written, but I hope you pick yourself up out of that mud soon, although it is supposed to be very good for the skin! Enjoyed the read very much. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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