Theorem The Truth Serum

Rookie - 245 Points (1979-present / San Leandro)

The Rains - Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

The rains come and wash away
the happy gleam inside my eyes
and darken them with their
gray clouded blanket.
Another three months
of deeply felt loneliness.
I will sink with in the
precipitated mud
where my self-esteem
shall dwell.


Comments about The Rains by Theorem The Truth Serum

  • Ernestine Northover (10/16/2006 3:35:00 PM)

    This is a nice write Cokbod, very well written, but I hope you pick yourself up out of that mud soon, although it is supposed to be very good for the skin! Enjoyed the read very much.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 15, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 19, 2010


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