The Real Patriots Poem by Rohan Bendre

The Real Patriots

Rating: 5.0


There was The Poetry Competition.
Every Competitor was Equally Matched,
But Jack and Sam were the Weakest Ones.
There came Thomas and Tobby
'' Take a Look at their Patriotic Composition
They are Sure to get Imposition.''
No Sooner Tobby and Thomas Teased Than they were joined by Alan & Harris
'' In Errors They are Leaders
They urgently need a Grammar Teacher.''
They Continued
'' The Grammar will surely be a Reason
The Judge will rarely pay any Attention.''
There came the Teacher
'' Little Critics Surely have a Story to tell
Without Errors How can Any one Excel? .''
Teacher Continued
'' You Gave So much Importance To Grammar
What Lacked Was that you were Hardly Practical.''
Teacher Continued
'' On the Other Hand No matter how many Grammatical Errors did they made
Practical Thoughts Immensely came to this Little Poet's help.''
Teacher Continued.
'' Surely for You this is a Stunner
This Two are deserved Winners.''
When it comes to Patriotism
You should be Realistic and Practical.
Then Effect will be Majestic and Magical.
I Proud to be Indian.

Saturday, July 27, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: patriotic,patriotic,patriotism,teacher
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 27 July 2013

A great poem with a great meaning.

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