The Revolution Poem by Tehniat Rizwan

The Revolution

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Revolution came and prosperity spread; No animals to tame and war widespread; People fighting hard for independence; Lack of resources and blood in abundance; And Thou! ! ! I fear, , the world is in danger; People stand and are ready to be martyred; But every child, , every minute is startled; Why can't we stand up and join our hands; Revolution doesn't mean to destroy each others'lands; Also, think for children, women and old lads; Don't be selfish or your soul will die; , You won't be able to catch hearts and buy; My brothers and sisters, , Revolution is not yet complete, ; , Don't fight between yourselves, attack devils and compete! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 09 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Tehniat. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Saadat Tahir 19 April 2011

nice lines looks like its directed at the ring of fire around the oil barrels......indeed their is a grave danger that the revolutions will be hijacked... well done. cheers

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* Stephen *king 14 April 2011

yeah revolution is not complete till devil is not defeated. A good poam

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Trevor Tang 16 February 2011

For me, i can link this up with the revolution of Egypt and Tunisian's one. Stand up and be brave for a fight. It; s a fight for freedom. I like it.

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Tehniat Rizwan

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karachi, Pakistan
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