THE ROAD AHEAD IS CLEAR AND BRIGHT
The road ahead is clear and bright
The morning sun is beautiful on it
There is no need to dream or think
It is enough to walk and see
To walk and walk and walk
And feel free
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Morning sun is very beautiful that reflects light in walking. Road is clearly visible. Brightness is adored well here. An interesting verse is shared in this page.10