Friday, May 4, 2007

The Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rose lying dead
Upon the drenched ground,
Bruised, hurt and broken
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Michael Fischer 05 May 2007

Good work...it almost brought a tear to my eye. It was very moving. The ending was powerful and memorable. Top marks from me! -Michael

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