The Rose Poem by Gabriel SimpsonLaw

The Rose

Rating: 3.2


I said your lips were like the rose
I said I liked the tilt of your nose
You said you’d be mine 'til all hell froze
Sure must have been a cold winter

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Larisa Davis 31 August 2007

i loved it. it had this pictue-esq relationship. then it suddenly hit you. this ended. and with the rhyme scheme a-a-a-b, it hit you on a non rhyme. perfect

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