The Rose Poem by elysabeth faslund

The Rose

Rating: 5.0


The evening sky a pale rose
ripening into deep claret
pouring across the horizon

As the horizon deepens
burgundy velvet
caresses your skin
as pale rose scent
fills an empty room

Lovliness does not hide
stides forth, brazen
with song, with answers
from lands unknown

Once Pangea
why division
winds bear petals
across this ocean

The rose knows
a home

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jing Jing 24 February 2008

perfect controversy, the rose is the object whichh steady fastly pursued, beautiful write.

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Thad Wilk 11 February 2008

An eloquent and dreamy poem Elysabeth! thank you for sharing! ! ! *10*! ! Best wishes Friend Thad

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Broken Peaces 11 February 2008

In perfect harmony with your subject Elysabeth 10 Chris

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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