The Sea Sun With Red Shine

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The Sun In the west!
with Shining Smile in evening! !
Made my moment delightful best! !
A novel life with young wisdom beginning! !

The Sun with gules beam wishing Bye!
Owing to grinning existence on beach!
All are in pleasure out of Shy! !
My spirit having jubilation to each! !

The place of prospect and love!
Elegant like a gorgeous bird!
My bosom and conscience was like flying dove! !
Which omitted my all misery, now become my guard! !


After sun's last blazing wave!
In my soul and body return full of woe!
God please keep this jiffy always, its my crave! !
else I grope distress head to Toe! !

BY Your Friend: Baquee Billah Ahmed

The Sea Sun With Red Shine
Monday, August 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,nature love,seaside,sunset,sunshine
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Once upon a time I was in a beach of Kerala and it was in the evening, that evening sunset moment was so beautiful, which attracted me to write somthing
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 28 September 2018

Stunning imagery and a wonderful expression in great lines!

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 28 September 2018

Thank U so. Much

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Naila Rais 29 August 2018

Such a marvelous scene.... Imagery is well developed..... Thnx for sharing..10 Naila

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 29 August 2018

Thank U.............................................................

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 29 August 2018

Thank U...............................................................

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