As deep as the ocean's dept,
As deep as this secret I kept,
Far as a road,
Long as a boat,
Dont worry my love this secret I hold,
Will be in my heart locked and closed.
Good theme, nicely written, perfect rhymes. I know your secret...you're in love. Is this your first? Keep writing...see you then.
that's love and its secret well locked inside the heart-boat...nicely worded...good piece...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is really good...It's like you're saying its a huge secret but you will not spill. Very nice! :)