Erick Puma

Rookie (04/14/93 / New Jersey)

The Secret - Poem by Erick Puma

As deep as the ocean's dept,

As deep as this secret I kept,

Far as a road,

Long as a boat,

Dont worry my love this secret I hold,

Will be in my heart locked and closed.

Comments about The Secret by Erick Puma

  • (6/21/2010 11:52:00 AM)

    This is really good...It's like you're saying its a huge secret but you will not spill. Very nice! :) (Report) Reply

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  • Crazy Vampire (6/1/2010 1:17:00 PM)

    really good...i liked it! (Report) Reply

  • (5/16/2010 10:32:00 PM)

    Good theme, nicely written, perfect rhymes. I know your're in love. Is this your first? Keep writing...see you then. (Report) Reply

  • (5/16/2010 10:11:00 PM)

    that's love and its secret well locked inside the heart-boat...nicely worded...good piece...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 7, 2010

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