R. G. Bell

Rookie - 195 Points (6/15/52)

The Seventh Day - Poem by R. G. Bell

I - Quiet, please.
Creator at rest.

And on this Seventh Day I rest, or try.
I leave them alone, but they will not leave Me!
Aid and advice, some praise, advice and aid,
A billion billion whispers piled into a scream,
A din from every lump of rock left warm
And damp in a weeklong wake of making.
Water! Invented! Given! And still they plead.
And not just water (though water was the key)
Clouds of stars and dark to see them by
Flow in formation with minimum bumping.
Water beings and land, rooted, swimming,
Walking, flying; a line of food enough
For food for the food of the food, all from
Water, leavened with animated dirt.
Gifts came aplenty without their asking more.
Still more I gave before their asking came.

* * * * * *
All's done for them they could not do alone
With minds (I thought) enough to do the rest.
What was that? An algebra test!
My Me! the things they will not do alone,
Leave preparation, lean on prayer,
And spray their ceaseless noises through My air.
"Please spare this life, but kill those over there."
They pass through unrestrained, as they might seem
A puff of smoke through a window screen.
Yet more, "O Lord, we seek Thy will to know
Should we buy this house or its neighbor twin
With the bigger yard but cinnamon
Paper in the hall she says must surely go?
Please guide us in Thy will and wisdom."
So why not build some altar stone and burn
A calf to learn which sock deserves first turn
Or to fold or to wad your toilet tissue, hmmmm?

II - The Non-Pray-ers
I Am - Still here.

The ones who strive to deny are less…
Let's say troublesome, yet far more troubling.
They dig into my little organizings:
Biology, physics, chemistry, math,
And all their many thousand sub-divides,
Believing in their unbelief that just
Another test, a theory here or two
From a handful more of geniuses
Will explain it all, and explain to all
How all was made, but none of it created,
Just a godless, spontaneous happenstance.
Well… that should help their time to pass.

* * * * * * * * * *
A mole-blind mole surveys his hole
And knows it end to end,
And knows he's nearly reached his goal
Just there, beyond the bend.

Another scrape of dirt removed,
A day or two at most,
And he is sure that all is proved
And he'll deserve to boast

That all there is to know is known,
And there can be no doubt
That he alone has learned and shown
What earth is all about.

But there always seems to be more dirt
Behind what's been removed.
It hits him with a little hurt,
There's something left unproved!

But the tunnel branch still left undone
Must lead to final answers!
(Or yet more questions, mud or dung,
Or an unexpected ant stirs.)

* * * * * * * * * * *
So they work at the work of uncreating Me.
And, if it lets them breed a better tree,
Or a cornier corn, or a milkier cow,
That's fine, for now. Just, please, acknowledge how
The primal germ and seed were made by Me.


III. The Creator-Merchant
Clerks - Mind the store.

This might be fun; thinking of them
Thinking of Me as Owner of a store,
A general store, foundation, walls, roof and floor
Conceived, constructed, ordered and owned by Him.
And then this Owner, tired, takes off a day
And leaves His clerks in charge a day.
I'm due a day, and they can do a day.
Let them picture Me sitting by a pool,
Watching football, sipping something cool.
(It's a silly picture, true, but no more
True or less than others they cast Me in;
Sun or snake, river, wind, volcano, tree.
All, and none, and more, the truth be known.
So why not dozing merchant by His pool?)
By My Authority have they authority
Given all good help; to choose to dust the cans
Of corn or first to sweep the dusty floor,
Rotate stock, discard old milk, charge customers
Fairly, and fairly on delivery pay
The vendors, work well with fellow clerks.
No needless phoning the Boss's home!

* * * * * * * * * *
No, that's not quite right. They are clerks, yes,
But, by turns, customers and vendors, too,
All selling their goods and buying their goods.
One trades his apples for another's wool.
One meat and leather for another's shoes.
One forges nails for another's wood.
One wanders in with distant news.
And if, in the general abundance,
One brings a song, compelling story,
Or entertaining acrobatic act,
Let them learn their market value too.
From each according to abilities,
To each according to abilities,
With charity for those who would but can't
And scorn for those who can but won't.
And deal with thieves in no uncertain terms,
Whether what they thieve are goods or lives
Or the liberties that make lives good,
And quickly, before their numbers soar
Enough to raise a storewide, worldwide war.

* * * * * * * * * * * *
Could they picture merchant Me without
Raising up an enterprising clergyman
Raising up himself a new, competing sect?
(The Brotherhood of The Pool Lounging Grocer?)
At first one small enough to be killed for,
Then big enough to kill some others for,
As if they hadn't now enough religions,
Tongues and false ambitions to slaughter for?
Probably not.


IV. The Re-Creator
Lets talk recycling.

Do they know (some must) that every water drop
In stream or sea, in puddle or pole,
Has passed through a bladder a million times?
Drink, as they must and will, they share their cups
With tyrants, slaves, with livestock, cats and mutts,
Dead heroes, dead cowards, with nuns and whores,
Plus humming birds, vultures and dinosaurs.
Then, passed once more through cloud and rain, it's drunk
Again and again and again and again.
(So ponder that with your morning cup of Joe.)

* * * * * * * *

They fear for harming what's being destroyed
When all they control is pace. I smile.
Let's pretend a conversation, Old Book style.


As Joe stands barefoot in the yard he mows
Enjoying the joy of green between his toes,
"If I stand right here to repay my beer,
No neighbors' eyes to offend, or leer,
How long before my soles won't think it hot
And make me step around the unclean spot? "

"One good night's rain, or two light ones at dawn.
Before you need to mow again it's gone.
Did you know last night a nibbling hare
Made rain on the spot you stand on there? "

Joe, stepping off,
"And if I pour a can of motor oil,
How long will that destroy the soil? "

"It won't destroy, just make a smear
And leave a bare spot, maybe a year."

"And if plutonium, a pound discard?
I know I'd die, but what of my yard? "

"By time it needed mowing again…
Well… there'll be no yard to mow by then."

"I will have destroyed then? "

"Not at all.
Replaced, by desert or plain or mountain or sea.
With enough half-lives it's plutonium-free."

"So I can make whatever mess I want! ? "

"Yes, but please don't take that as a taunt."

"Then what do you mean? Speak plain! "

"You cannot make a permanent mess.
If you don't wish to live with one, or can't,
Don't make it. Or if you must, clean it up!
Cooking a meal or building a home
Necessitate a mess. Just clean it up!
It's all a matter of your own convenience.
If you'd rather enjoy a mountain's looks
Than tear it down for a road or ore,
In the short term, Joe, that's up to you.
Level or hollow some, leave most? It's up to you.
But know that every mountain range will fall
While new ones grow. That part's not up to you!
Seas come and go of their own volition.
It's all a perfectly run condition,
And without the strength to stop, or do,
It's not your mission."

* * * * * * * * * *
Nothing's made that was not made before.
Nothing's born that was not bourn before.
Nothing's died that was not tried before.
Every leaf has been a leaf before.
All has been, and all will be again,
With circular cycles, circular time.
And souls? Are they so jealous as not to share
With their selves they were but don't recall
Or their selves to be they've not yet met?
(More to ponder with that morning cup of Joe.)

V. Creator-Adviser
Suggestions.

They want advice.
If I were to give some…
Random thoughts.

1. Prioritize, Prioritize, Prioritize.

It's a menu, not a to do list.
Ignore the worthless.
It blinds to what's worthwhile.
Consider it a test
Of useful, discriminating thought.
Do what you're supposed to, and can.
I have managed the rest. Trust Me.

2. Sin

You assume horrific guilt
For being the beings I made.
I find that insulting.
Almighty damn insulting.

The "sin" is not in being what you are
But in not being what you can.
You believe you disappoint,
(And, I admit, you do,)
But more for what you don't
And less for what you do.

You miss the mark.
Once, you called that "sin."
Your word, defined,
Once meant "to miss the mark, "
To be imperfect. Good word.
Ask an Ancient Hebrew writer
Or an archer serving King James.
"To sin - to miss the mark."
Others, seeking power,
Transformed it to "fatally evil, "
A birthright curse of separation
To use against you,
To make you dependent on them
For a connection with Me.
Every salesman's first task
Is to show your want or need.
Fair enough.
But for an ecclesiastical merchant
To make up your need…
Concerning Me?
Now there's an Original Sin.

You were not made to be rejected.
I don't make rejects.

You're better than you think you are
But nowhere near as good as you might.
Yes, you miss the mark,
And, yes, you are imperfect beings.
But you are still My imperfect beings.

3. Evil

Oh, there's evil in abundance,
A profoundly bad miss,
A most unworthy choice.
But it's not a state of being
Imposed at birth.

Evil's just another test.
Recognize, confront, defeat it when it's young
Even if you are not.
A threatening mole if snipped today
Won't make you die another day.
(Franklin calls it a stitch. Same idea.)
Not doing so misses the mark.
You sin.

Allow an honest cop to stop today
What will take an army tomorrow.
It's badly missing the mark
To sacrifice future millions to end an evil
When a dedicated few can end it now.
Evil, like cancer, feeds on tolerance, multiplies.
Starve it.

4. Tyrants

Speaking of evil,
Shun those who would rule.
But fear those who seek to be ruled.
The mob empowers tyrants,
Feeding evil.

Seek neither to rule nor to be ruled.
Leadership does not depend on blind authority.
Follow only those who lead by merit.
Lead only when the merit's yours.
Teach only if you know.
Think, explore until you're sure you do.
Seek teachers who already have.
Challenge the teaching to be sure they have.
Assault will strengthen Truth.
Truth begets belief.
Coerced belief will almost surely
Miss the mark.

5. The Technology of Modesty

Enjoy the stars.
But think hard, and think hard again
Before trying to reach them
Lest you fall short and only manage
A more lethal means
Of reaching others of yourselves.
Seek technology that makes you better,
Not louder.
Proving able to say a lot
Doesn't prove you have a lot to say.
A clear thought from a quill
Trumps useless noise in hard drive.

Beware the traps in awesome trappings,
And those who crave to awe you
With their awesomeness.
It's a shameful sham.
Lavish temples
Of religion, government, medicine,
Industry, fashion, and entertainment
Aren't free.
Polished stone and glass and gilt
Provide no aid in reaching Me,
Leading nations, or healing flesh.
They only pad the bill,
And demand a currency
More than currency alone.
Temple-ers insist you pay them awe.

Use the lavish part
Of tithes or tax or fees
To hire the artisans
To build your homes, and theirs.
Cut out pretentious middlemen.

6. Humor

I gave the gift of laugh.
Find more time to use it,
Mostly as a joy
But also as a weapon against tyrants.
It's devastating.

7. Love

My best, most dangerous gift.
When false or allowed to die
Betrayal achieves eternal life.
Don't make commitments you're not committed to,
Whether to spouse or child,
Friend or any worthy cause.
Far better to make none than to keep none.

Don't let your would-be Rulers convince you
The passions I gave you are wrong.
That leads to the tyranny of
Subordination and control
And will remake you into willing slaves.
I don't make slaves.
Don't let them.

There is no inherent evil
In the passions you possess
When properly directed.
Lust, like fire (related gift)
Should be confined
To a well-made hearth.
Unleash desire and ride it freely,
Exhaust your petty strifes
With one to whom you are faithfully joined,
Whose fires match your own.

Want to be awed? Look at the stars.
They're free, and made, in part,
To set the lovemaking in motion
Or guide a gentle return to earth
Once the motions of the making end.
The gifts of four bare feet
In a clean warm bed
Are as great in a cottage as a castle,
Maybe better for lacking burdens
Of useless awesomeness.

VI. Creator-Planner
Tomorrow, back to work.

I look at all my Work, and it is good.
Time and gravity are clever tricks.
I'm really glad the stars are in the mix;
Islands of warm in cold, expanding seas.
As things move out I'll make some more of these.

Those noisy beings are not exactly right.
No one here to blame, it seems, but Me.
I must have left them just a bit undone.
Perhaps it is because I made them last,
The final second, the final making day.
Perhaps I was a little tired and stopped
Their polishing a rub or two too soon.

I made them smart enough to ponder things
That they're not strong enough to act upon.
That must frustrate them in ways I cannot know.

Tomorrow I will set about to set it right.
They need more confidence, and yet less hubris.
The balance is so precarious
They can't decide which way to fall.
Without limiting their many choices
They need to be inspired to better ones.
It might take just My whisper on the scales,
A deeper breath, a cleaner line of thought.

I could raise up a better race of dog
To live with them from infancy infirm
To senility infirm. Just that might be enough.

Something must be done. Something will be done.
Alone, I need them better company,
I need them putting better music in the air,
‘Cause, after all, that's why I put them there.

VII. The Eighth Day

It starts at dawn.

Though life is not, I will be fair.
Till then, be well, endure…prepare.

2009


Comments about The Seventh Day by R. G. Bell

  • Bri Edwards (5/9/2018 4:36:00 PM)


    (continued) ...(IN CASE OTHERS HAVEN'T FOLLOWED MY 2018 COMMENTS FROM THEIR OUTSET, I'VE ONLY BEEN COMMENTING TODAY ON SECTION lV TODAY.) AND NOW I'M NEARLY DONE! ! ! I BELIEVE I SENT THE WHOLE POEM TO MYPOEMLIST IN 2013; I TRIED TODAY AGAIN. I MAY USE AT LEAST SECTION lV IN ONE OF MY (usually-monthly; for the past few years) showcases, in which i display poems i have chosen from the poems of (usually) PH members. Thanks. and, R.G., WELCOME BACK? ? TO ph. BRI :) (Report) Reply

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  • Bri Edwards (5/9/2018 4:28:00 PM)


    (cont.) ...Nothing's made that was not made before.
    Nothing's born that was not bourn before.
    Nothing's died that was not tried before. ....bourn**, or bourne or born? ? ? ? ?
    ** bourn
    bôrn /noun dialect bourn
    a small stream, especially one that flows intermittently or seasonally (cont.) .....
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  • Bri Edwards (5/9/2018 4:02:00 PM)


    (cont.) ...you have spoken of what some scientists (and laymen) paint as THE BIG PICTURE! ! ! ! BUT PEOPLE DON'T LIVE AS LONG AS IT TAKES THE big picture TO BE PAINTED. IN FACT (i think it is a fact) THE PICTURE EVOLVES (usually) so slowwwwly (perhaps volcanic eruptions and earthquakes are small exceptions) that Mankind has not seen the brush strokes occurring. (cont.) (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (5/9/2018 4:02:00 PM)


    (cont.) ....and i read that there is plenty plant and animal life around the site of the Chernobyl disaster, years after the event, so maybe massive radioactivity is good once in a while? ? ?
    here: It's all a perfectly run condition,
    And without the strength to stop, or do,
    It's not your mission. ...........(cont.) ...
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  • Bri Edwards (5/9/2018 3:54:00 PM)


    (cont.) ...i got a slight chuckle out of this: By time it needed mowing again…
    Well… there'll be no yard to mow by then. ........................exactly! ! ! where can i buy plutonium? ? ? i too have wondered about how oil and its derivatives can harm the Earth/earth; i mean PERMANENTLY! after all, oil comes from the earth, 'don't it'? ? (cont.) ....
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  • Bri Edwards (5/9/2018 3:45:00 PM)


    (cont.) i wonder who and what you are referring to here: They fear for harming what's being destroyed
    When all they control is pace. I smile hmm/? ?
    If I stand right here to repay my beer,
    No neighbors' eyes to offend, or leer, ...i'm loving the rhyming. but repay my beer? ? ? how about pee my beer? ? ? what does repay beer mean? (cont.) ...
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  • Bri Edwards (5/9/2018 3:40:00 PM)


    (cont.) ...i HAVE pondered the water cycle/sharing/usage idea. i assume water (for the most part) does remain water, chemically, for eons, perhaps ever since Mother Nature or...........Whomever...........caused it to exist. when my wife tells me we musn't use old water, but must use newly-filtered-filtered-filtered water for making tea etc. i sometimes question her use of the word new. (cont.) ... (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (5/9/2018 3:36:00 PM)


    well, i see, in a comment from nearly five years ago, that i already read the whole thing once, but i'm back to read section lV again, as R.G. suggested in a poem comment i NOW know he sent to me in 2013! maybe i already DID reread lV? ? ? ?

    re lV:

    line 2: pole or pool? i like alliterations. :) .......(continued) ..
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/13/2016 12:51:00 PM)


    The Seventh Day! The rest of the Creator; the Sabbath Day. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (8/15/2013 8:26:00 PM)


    OK R.G., i just finished reading the whole thing, start to finish. It took, with time out to make some notes (most of which i lost somehow; blame me) , about 40 minutes to read. i suppose about 20-25 would have been enough if i just read.

    By the time I got near the end i was ALMOST convinced that I was really listening to God speaking to us! ! ! That was a little scary.

    Anyone who takes the time to read this should, I think, come away a better-in-some-small-way person.
    Of course I like to think that anyone who takes the time to read the whole poem (and maybe think about it at least a little bit while reading) , including ME, is a better person to begin with. Forgive me God, for saying that. I know I shouldn't have.

    Those noisy beings are not exactly right.
    No one here to blame, it seems, but Me.
    I must have left them just a bit undone.
    Perhaps it is because I made them last,
    The final second, the final making day.
    Perhaps I was a little tired and stopped
    Their polishing a rub or two too soon...............Thanks a lot God. Now I know Who to blame!


    Something must be done. Something will be done.
    Alone, I need them better company,
    I need them putting better music in the air,
    ‘Cause, after all, that's why I put them there.

    Did/Do you mean that You need Men to be better company for You? That includes women, of course. bri

    P.S. I suppose I would not be incorrect to call this a monumental poem; a monumental creation. But, if it took you 25 years to complete, I guess God has something to teach you about being efficient.
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  • Bri Edwards (8/9/2013 1:35:00 PM)


    Walking, flying; a line of food enough
    For food for the food of the food,

    is that referring to the food chain in nature, from bottom prey to top predator?
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    'Please spare this life, but kill those over there.'

    exactly the feeling i can imagine some people getting. but, there ARE choices to be made. and, according to what i was taught in church as a boy/young man, God Herself (hee hee) chose to kill some and spare others. so why wouldn't some people (christians at least) think they could ask God to make more decisions like that?
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

    So why not build some altar stone and burn
    A calf to learn which sock deserves first turn
    Or to fold or to wad your toilet tissue, hmmmm?

    the only thing i can think of about what you mean with sock reference is: which sock(s) to put on in the morning. and perhaps you meant to put Or [how] to fold or to wad............hmmmm? cute!
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


    II - The Non-Pray-ers
    I Am - Still here.

    poor God. feeling neglected, unselected, rejected?
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

    a mole-blind mole surveys his hole
    And knows it end to end,

    i already commented on mole excavation work......even though i realize you are talking about non-moles.
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    But the tunnel branch still left undone
    Must lead to final answers!
    (Or yet more questions, mud or dung,
    Or an unexpected ant stirs.)

    i love ANSWERS // ANT STIRS. if i didn't already know this was NOT MY poem, i would think it was; it is SO clever!

    i have more reading and commenting to do............later. thanks. bri p.s. R.G., would it help you to read with one eye if i used capital letters all of the time?
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  • Bri Edwards (8/8/2013 7:06:00 PM)


    R.G., i've started this and plan to finish (reading) it someday. i have sent a message to you, the poet. as for the comment by adeline foster, i can hear her saying that. not to worry! i avoided reading all of the comment by smoky hoss, as i don't want to hear something i haven't read already. thanks for sharing.
    p.s. i just submitted a poem which also deals with religion, is NOT nearly as long, is perhaps not as profound, (also) has some humor in it, and is written by an unbeliever who has an open mind (really!) . i almost forgot to give the title.
    LIfe Is Like A Stupid Joke...... [peculiarities of Mankind; religion etc. (my doubts) : Hell, here i come! ; HUMOR? ? ] bri
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  • (7/31/2013 11:23:00 AM)


    I admit to sometimes avoiding long poems. But not long poems
    with quality. This one has a lot of that, and reading it was worthwhile. I admire
    the mind that figured out a way to write this and make it succinct
    and understandable and orderly (just like the mind of the Creator!)
    As above, so below, eh? Great write. I will read this many times,
    because I find it inspiring.
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  • (1/26/2012 3:44:00 PM)


    A very long poem that deserves respect.
    A labour of love on the poets part.
    A very good write.
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  • (12/14/2011 7:24:00 AM)


    This must have taken a very sincere effort of time and energy and thought to complete. For that reason alone it deserves attention and applause. However; beyond just that, it is to be considered, as it creates several compelling ideas in regards to the 'Creator to creation' relationship. I personally find hope, and feel the entire message here is centered within the last three paragraphs of V.2. 'Sin'; that is, we are not rejected, and even though imperfect as we are, we still find ourselves wanted and accepted by this Creator of the entire universe. The words of V.5. 'The Technology of Modesty' are written in good proverbial language; and V.6. 'Humor' is right on the mark! It is certainly a gift that we all would do well to enjoy, and employ far more often, in good ways. Another very valuable phrase from this body of work is in section V.7. 'Love'; ' there is no inherent evil, in the passions you possess, when properly directed.' - so true, and so well stated. More people should take this to heart. I find the ending hopeful, and tantalizing; a great expression to wrap it all up.
    Overall this is well worth the time it takes to read, as it gives cause to pause and consider several important aspects of living and being, with our selves, others, nature, and God.
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  • Adeline Foster (11/19/2010 1:12:00 PM)


    May I ask why were all your poems on one slot. Iat makes for tedeous reading. in fact Like I very few will read to the end. If I miss something, so be it.
    Adeline
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 15, 2012


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