The Smiling Water Poem by zhenyu Jin

The Smiling Water

Rating: 5.0


You lie in silence, silent, and silent

The impact of the restless flow is just the color of the past

Become a waterfall? You are too tired to be

The noise is the accompaniment of life after all, it can't replace the peace of mind

Gather like the sea? you sighed to say it's the final destination

Freedom? The freedom that was once thought to be never lost?

The ripples rippled away, but you are confined to this small space

People cast a lot of dirt on you, they shouted and agitated


You are still in pain, but you will not run dry due to the hardship

Lit by the golden sun, caressed by the bright moonlight

You miss the distance, looking peaceful and deep

Your transparent and clean smile, which will not be polluted

Is your song of the whole spring

Saturday, July 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: attitude,nature,new
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When I see the polluted water, my mood is very complicated: If water had the same idea like human? So I wrote this poem, hoping people can protect the environment.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 28 July 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Jin. Very nice and impressive narration which reflects the writer's own personality too. Thank you very much,

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 July 2017

You lie in silence Become a waterfall Gather like the sea, The ripples rippled away Your transparent and clean smile Your smile shall not be polluted. Very nice poem. Read carefully and gathered all these points from your poem Loved reading it. Thank u dear poetess. tony

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Jin Zhenyu 15 July 2017

THKS, Tony! I am new here, but I wrote so many poems before... And I am a man~ 19 y.o law student in China~ Sooo glad to see your comment!It means a lot to me! !

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