You lie in silence, silent, and silent
The impact of the restless flow is just the color of the past
Become a waterfall? You are too tired to be
The noise is the accompaniment of life after all, it can't replace the peace of mind
Gather like the sea? you sighed to say it's the final destination
Freedom? The freedom that was once thought to be never lost?
The ripples rippled away, but you are confined to this small space
People cast a lot of dirt on you, they shouted and agitated
You are still in pain, but you will not run dry due to the hardship
Lit by the golden sun, caressed by the bright moonlight
You miss the distance, looking peaceful and deep
Your transparent and clean smile, which will not be polluted
Is your song of the whole spring
You lie in silence Become a waterfall Gather like the sea, The ripples rippled away Your transparent and clean smile Your smile shall not be polluted. Very nice poem. Read carefully and gathered all these points from your poem Loved reading it. Thank u dear poetess. tony
THKS, Tony! I am new here, but I wrote so many poems before... And I am a man~ 19 y.o law student in China~ Sooo glad to see your comment!It means a lot to me! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great start with a nice poem, Jin. Very nice and impressive narration which reflects the writer's own personality too. Thank you very much,