The Smiling Water Comments
You lie in silence, silent, and silent
The impact of the restless flow is just the color of the past
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You lie in silence Become a waterfall Gather like the sea, The ripples rippled away Your transparent and clean smile Your smile shall not be polluted. Very nice poem. Read carefully and gathered all these points from your poem Loved reading it. Thank u dear poetess. tony
THKS, Tony! I am new here, but I wrote so many poems before... And I am a man~ 19 y.o law student in China~ Sooo glad to see your comment！It means a lot to me! !
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3/14/2026 8:18:39 PM # 1.0.0
A great start with a nice poem, Jin. Very nice and impressive narration which reflects the writer's own personality too. Thank you very much,