MAMMA sits with her blue eyed child,
this kids a plastic saint, she looks
like her father, the one that ran
away.
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well writen poem for being short but right to the point. It is hard being a single mom and dealing with a broken heart.
DAVID...SAD STORY WITH HIGH EMOTIONAL VALUE...GOOD KINETICS FOR A SHORT PIECE...TEN FOR THE '' STATUS''! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
It is so sad to see the pain being passed on to the wee whipper snappers David. But at least she is keeping her family together, where they are watched over. Smiling Tai
Short, concise, to the point, and very emotional.... Great one. Preets