Thursday, March 8, 2007

The Songbird Comments

Rating: 5.0

With the voice of an angel she sang everyday
She sang everywhere we went
Someone said she could become a star
With the voice that was heaven sent
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David Harris
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JoAnn McGrath 10 April 2007

It's a beautiful story. Another happy ending : O) I'm so happy for you and her. You mean there might be hope for me yet : O) Jugs of hugs David JoAnn

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rachael richmond 15 March 2007

this is so beautiful, david, it created a 'film' in my mind as i read it.....just loved the ending...awwww rachael x

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Melvina Germain 10 March 2007

David you will never know how much I loved this epic. I needed to hear these words, they fit so well. It was a dream I always had and now I'm glad I didn't follow it. God is good, he never ceases to amaze me, he knows me so well and uses good people like you to show me the way. Thankyou for these wonderful words, another favourite from you and certainly worth 100 but I have no choice but to give you a 10. The tears are still flowing, thankyou so much. Melvina

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Lynda Robson 08 March 2007

Lovely poem David, long but a story with a meaning, about true friends, Best wishes Lynda xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 March 2007

wow david... my friend your ladys being treated today... a few full stops would have been nice you know just to get the breath back, its a long one...10

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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